Monday, December 21, 2009

Synonyms 2

1. use = application
2. cure = remedy
3. study = report
4. tackle = stop
5. active = lively
6. guided = led

Reflection 4

In compare and contrast writing it should be there four paragraph. First one is introduction in this paragraph you will show the subject compare and contest. In second paragraph you have to write the similarities. In third paragraph you have to write differences. In fourth paragraph you write the conclusion with your opinions.

Reflection 3

In process essays we used present passive with past participle. But, use the same introduction as procedure. Also you have to write main paragraph and conclusion.It contains about 150 words with linking words same as procedure.

Reflection 2

In my opinion, narrative writing more difficult than procedure essay. Narrative writhing contains 4 main paragraphs.
The introduction: use the past continuous.
Paragraph 2: we describe the action.
Paragraph 3: we describe what happened.The conclusion: we describe our feeling.

Reflection 1

I think writing procedure essays are easier because the information is giving and you only have to put the introduction. Then you put the main bragraph with link the sentences by using the imperative and you put the conclusion. No imagination or creativity is needed.

Sunday, December 13, 2009

How olives oil is made

Manufacturing olive oil is a long and difficult process but if you follow these steps carefully you’ll produce good quality oil.

First the olives are harvested between September and December and collected in berealh the nets the trees. After that the leaves and stones are removed before crushing to remove impurities. Then the olives are crushed by using granite stones but this should be within 24 to 36 hours of picking for reducing acidity. Next the paste obtained is layered on mats by put under pressure from a screw or hydraulic press. Last step the liquid collected and put through a centrifugal separator to separate water and impurities from oil. So the oil made by hydraulic presses is expensive but the one separated by crunching or heating the olives is cheaper.

Finally , I think the olives oil is healthy for all people and you can used it for many purpose like massage and cooking.
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Sunday, December 6, 2009

Baniyas +Abu Dhabi

The U.A.E has seven emirates. So in this essay I am going to compare and contrast Baniyas and Abu Dhabi. There are many similarities and many differences.

The first similarity is both are in the U.A.E. Another similarity is both share the same government. Yet another similarity is they have the same educational and healthcare system.

However, there are also a lot of differences. The first difference is that Baniyas has fewer high-rise buildings but, in Abu Dhabi, there are more modern and higher buildings. Another difference is the life in Baniyas is more traditional because most people in it are bedouim. Yet another difference is that A.D has more traffic and noise because the population is more.

Finally, in my opinion, Abu Dhabi is better than Baniyas because it is modern and you can find all of life’s necessities.

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Saturday, November 14, 2009

National Day

Last national day was a beautiful day and special in everything. I was at school at that time. However the day before the national day I brought the invitation from the school to my parents to join us for the party of national day. So next morning I went to the school with them. First my parents went to my teachers to ask them about me. After that at 9:00 am the party started with Holy Quran. Then the first show started. It was about the history of the U.A.E and it included some old songs, some information about fishing ways in the past and something about the life in the desert. The second show was about the sport. We saw many students do gymnastic and some races. After that the students walked around with their families with the U.A.E flag. It was about 30 minutes. When they returned they took some cake with juice. After finishing eating the school give presents for the top students.
Finally, it was a nice party and I think it achieved its aims.

Making Biryani

Making biryani is a long procedure and you need to follow a lot of steps very carefully. If you carry out the following procedure you should produce high quality biryani.
Firstly, buy meat vegetables, spices, rice, tomatoes, salt and dried lemon. Next boil the meat in the water. Then cut and prepare the vegetables. After that remove the fat from the boiling water. Next step, add salt and spices to the meat until tender. After that take out the meat and add rice. Then return the meat to rice. After that cook for 30 to 40 minutes until ready. The last step in to serve and eat.
Finally, it is a delicious traditional Arabic food and by following the steps any own can make it.
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Sunday, November 8, 2009

Book the holiday

Everybody likes to go on holiday, but there are many ways to book a holiday. In this essay I will show you the steps to book a holiday on the internet.

First search for the site online. Second,choose the site you like. Then choose the country you want to visit. Next check the price for hotels and tickets and choose the price you like. After that you must insert your visa card number to confirm your booking. Finally make sure to take the number of the registration and sometimes it is necessary to make a copy of the registration.

As you can see, booking a holiday is not complicated. However, you must make sure you follow the steps of payment in the right order.

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Making butter

Making butter is a long procedure and you need to follow a lot of steps very carefully. If you carry out the following procedure you should produce high-quality butter.
Firstly, check the fresh milk for quality and fat content. Then leave the milk a few minutes to cool. After that you must separate the cream. Next place the butter in a jar. Then drain the buttermilk from the butter and churn the cream. After that you should wash the butter with cold water. So by doing that you remove the remaining buttermilk. Next step you add a small amount of salt to give special flavor. Then cut and wrap the butter. The final step is to store the butter in a fridge.
Finally, by these steps you can make the butter in a correct way with A nice flavor.
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my car story

Last year I was driving from my home to Abu Dhabi. My home is about 150kms from Abu Dhabi. Suddenly while I was driving the smoke came from my car. So I switch it off and tried to stop it, but the problem was I couldn’t see the road because of the smoke. After some time the amount of smoke reduce and I stop my car on side of the road and ran away because I thought the car would exploded. After a few minutes the smoke stop, so I went to the car and open the Bonnet to saw what was the problems. But I was not found it .Than I call recovery to took my car to musafah to saw the problems.

However I went to college with my friend. On afternoon I went to saw my car .When I reach there I found the mechanic checked my car. So I ask him what was the problem. He told me the block of the engine was broken. So I ask about the reason for broken he sad you not check the oil for long time. And I told him to repair but he told me he could not. He said the cost would be too much. So he advised me to bought another engine it would be cheaper take his advice and I bought another engine it was second hand.
Finally my car was repaired but after I long time. So I learn from that days I check the oil daily to not have this problem again to not west our time and money agene.
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